Lose Yourself in the Dream

I wanted the title of this to be "You've got to lose yourself in the dream." which is what Rena is saying when she is in this pose. It's from the first volume of .hack//legend of the twilight.
I changed the colours and stuff abit. I wanted to her top to be more tan coloured but my tiny range of pencils did not have that colour and I couldn't get it right with mixes. Also her massive sword isn't slung across her back like it should be.
All in all I think it's pretty good for me considering I can't draw for toffee. And that hand took me forever!